The Good: + There is a good communication of ideas and the blog is well laid out which bodes well for your final blog. + The research you have done complements your blog well and there is evidently a good understanding of what you are talking about.
The Bad: + All in all, I feel the blog lacks depth and this is what would help you reach the higher grades, but the blog shows promise. + More research into the actual theory would bring about this depth, but the understanding of the theory is undoubtedly there.
Grade: B/C
ReplyDeleteThe Good:
+ There is a good communication of ideas and the blog is well laid out which bodes well for your final blog.
+ The research you have done complements your blog well and there is evidently a good understanding of what you are talking about.
The Bad:
+ All in all, I feel the blog lacks depth and this is what would help you reach the higher grades, but the blog shows promise.
+ More research into the actual theory would bring about this depth, but the understanding of the theory is undoubtedly there.
Nathan